TOPIC: Web site critique

I have accomplished getting to the top, now I need some oppinions on likes and dislikes. No sense being at the top if no one calls right. Good or bad, let me have it, and omit the funnies. I need to know what I can change to pull people in! go to www.homeinspectorknoxville.com

Hey Sean,

Looking good over all. A few items.

1) The pages with the videos need more text added to them. This is important for SEO and to explain to the client what they're seeing.

2) There's too much going on with your home page. You have a lot of images in the center and on the right, especially since you have the two in your header image. I think I'd ditch the right side bar and have the logos at the bottom, or middle of you page content. I'd at least move the two images in your header to the left side.

3) "All full inspections come with your choice of a 100 day Home Warranty or Free Groceries." How much in free groceries?

4) Your Links page needs to be split into states your it starts to turn into a link farm.

5) Site Slogan needs to be Home Inspections in ... (list 5 cities here).

6) # A professional inspection report. (click here to view report) . There's no link.

This should get you started!

Sean I love that clean look.
Still working on some of my HIP sites but would like to know which template you are using.

Why should you choose our Home Inspection Service?
That is the only small issue on first impression after 5 second view.

Ok the reason is it questions rather than tells.
Instant doubt feeling.

By the way I actually like that on my FF browser the video is missing some image on landing, forcing me to scroll down in curiosity.
It adds more time on site so keep teasing after that .

Bob, that's theme 2 with a custom header.

Ok
Thanks
It seems to be very customizable.

The theme's will be a LOT more customizable shortly. Our news website version is almost done. The next step will be working on the conversion process.