TOPIC: Active Rain

I posted my first blog on active rain and if you have a chance take a look at let me know what you think.

If you have any thoughts on blogs let me know as there are a few areas of the Active rain blog that I am not familiar with.

My first agent contact went well. She wants me to drop off business cards.
I can see where active rain could generate a lot of business.

David
Just to make things easy could you post the url to your a.r. blog

I found your blog and wanted to give some advice.  If your going to market to a large audience, watch your grammar....

Use he/she or him/her  or your

You don't want to alienate a gender.  Always have someone else proof read, you correct, and have someone else proof read again.

As you can tell grammar/english was not one of my best subjects.

Here is the web link. http://activerain.com/blogs/clevelandhomeinspector


Where did I alienate a gender?

Post away on the my blog. Any comments or recommendations are welcome.

"With an energy audit the owner will know exactly were his energy losses are."

You should go back and edit your blog to say "his/her energy"...

Also you don't want people outside our little group to see us critique your blog!  You want positive responses on your blog to portray a nice neat tidy business.  Its all about appearances.

Keep in mind that everything you do on Active Rain is advertisement in some way or another.

Thanks

I did not see the error until you pointed it out.

I created a few newsletters and I send to a friend before I submit as I always have numerous grammar errors.

I really appreciate your feedback.

I am just trying to generate some business.

It is hard to spend 10K on a camera with the business being so slow.

I am definetly going for training and I will do what I can with an affordable camera.